Re: YSS Moirai OOC channel
I'll start out by saying Happy birthday Nazarii!
Anyways, down to business.
You are really treating your character as if her were the main character in some sort of overarching story. It's okay if you want to make your character's backstory matter, and if you want to make your character a badass, and if you want to make your character be a powerful character, capable of crushing opposition. I start having a problem with it when it impedes the story that is the YSS Moirai. You have to give each character the same amount of power within the plot, or it becomes unbalanced, with one character owning everything and everyone else standing there looking confused. Please downplay your character's tragic past. It happened, great. He's angsty, alright. Play it up. He doesn't need to be Ironman to be a fun character to read about or play. He's no Ichigo Kurosaki, who is able to come out of every single fight alive, through divine providence and, of course, another ace up his sleeve. NO STAR ARMY CHARACTER IS LIKE THAT. Strelgar is simply a military man with a semi-tragic past and with little knowledge of technology.
One last thing that irks me. As GM, if I say something happened, it happened. You said that Strelgar kept pace with a Yamataian woman who was sprinting full tilt. Without so much as an "oh crap this is kinda hard IN 2 G'S."
I said that his heart couldn't keep up. WHILE GIVING YOU THE BENEFIT OF THE DOUBT that he could MANUALLY control his heart rate. May I remind you that that ability is EXTREMELY rare. And for good reason: your heart rate keeps you alive.
You said that he went to sleep.
I said he fell unconscious.
He fell to unconsciousness again, his fatigue caught up with him.
He never woke in the first place thus the 'again' would never be used.
He did not let fatigue catch up with him. He dropped like a rock to the floor from what is basically brain blood loss.
Don't argue with me.